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Fic: The Many and Varied Reasons Why Neal Caffrey Should Listen to his Friend Moz
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[info]dhrelva wrote in [info]whitecollar_bb
Title: The Many and Varied Reasons Why Neal Caffrey Should Listen to His Friend Moz
LJ Username: dhrelva
Characters: Neal, Peter, Mozzie, Jones, Cruz, Hughes, June
Pairings: None
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Spoilers: This takes place at some unspecified time during the second half of Season One, with only mild spoilers for Free Fall and a hint of Home Invasion.
Word Count: 26,266
Summary: None of this would have happened if he'd played the alias how Mozzie told him to instead of how he did. Seriously, with all the other stuff he'd done, an honest identity shouldn't be able to get him into this much trouble six years later.

Author's Note: I do not own White Collar or its characters.


Many thanks to sirwynai for her awesome art!

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I can't access your story. The links lead to a blank page.

I've moved where I'm hosting the story. Hopefully it can be read now.

I love this story. Love, love, love. I've been looking around for good artist!Neal stories and this one is pretty much exactly what I was looking for. It makes a lot of sense, character wise, for Neal to not like his original work. Great story.

May I suggest Archive of Our Own as a place to post your fic? It has better terms of use than, say, FF.net.

Thank you so much!

And I'll look into Archive of our own; thanks for the suggestion! LJ wouldn't take a post that long and I was already late posting so I didn't have much time to look around for an alternate place to put it.

I can probably get you an invite for AO3 or you can put yourself into the invite list. They're pretty good about handing them out. Just let me know :)

This was fabulous! Everyone was perfectly in character and your plot rocked.

Have you posted this to any of the comms on LJ? I didn't see it if you did, but I bet you'd get a lot of feedback if you posted it to [info]whitecollarfic.

ETA: I have an AO3 invite if you want it.

Edited at 2010-09-18 05:01 am (UTC)

I'm glad you liked it.

(Thanks for the suggestion for putting it on whitecollarfic, I'll do that. I'm looking into setting up my onw webhost thing at my house, but if that falls through, I may take you up on the AO3 invite.)

This was a lot of fun, and a great look at Neal.

Thank you. Glad you liked it!

I have to say that I absolutely loved your fic!! It was so awesome and I love how all of the characters reacted and how much fun it all was.

Also, I noticed that you didn't have any art and that the artist was the same person who hasn't gotten back to my friend, Liz, so I decided to make you a few banners. I figured, the worst case scenario is that you get multiple arts and that's not such a bad thing. ;D So, find your art here.

Thank you! You are fabulously awesome!

It very well could be my internet connection, but I can't get this to load? :(

Oh,loved it!Lots of fun, great plot, and particularly good characterization for Mozzie. I can just hear him snarking about all this. *grin*

Great job - I enjoyed this story very much. Your character voices were pitch perfect. :)

OMG, I looooooove this! It make me laugh out loud repeatedly (oh, Neal!!), and your characterisations and voices and logic are brilliant! I love that you brought the whole ensemble into it, too. Just *flails* fantastic!!!

Oh, I adored this story! The whole idea that it was his law-abiding alias that caused him the most trouble, and also the whole idea that he was proud of his forgeries and dismissive of his original work. I loved the 'team' aspects of the story, as well as the way Peter and Neal worked with each other. Also, Mozzie = <3

Wow, this looks like such an interesting story, but i can't seem to find it =0

I'm not sure why the link isn't working for you; it should be at: http://www.angelfire.com/magic/drakeofdross/manyandvaried.html

this story is just fantastic. I've just got back into White Collar and I love it so much. your characterizations of Neal in particular are amazing. thanks for sharing!

This was SO GREAT! There is very little long gen fic in White Collar fandom, at least that I've found, so this was an extra special treat on so many levels -- it's a very original idea, and such a fantastic character study of Neal. I really feel like you nailed him: his unique blend of hedonism and kindness. And all the others were great too, perfectly in character and very well written. Thank you very much for the great read!

Awesome story. I love your Neal characterization, your portrayal of his extremely skewed (but nonetheless firm) sense of right and wrong. I also enjoyed watching the way the FBI danced around the fact that they like him but never trust him.

What a wonderful story. Mozzie, Peter, Hughes and Neal were all delightful, not to mention June. I loved your OC's as well.

Mozzie's criminal common sense; Peter's head shaking pride; Hughes' quick thinking and long suffering pragmatism and Neal's abrupt entry into empathy and remorse, all of it was touching and humorous and enlightening.

I love the fact that Neal has original artwork out there and he's shocked, shocked that anyone would pay for it; now the forgeries, THOSE are some of his finest pieces but these little slices of life? Why? LOL

His attitude reminds me of several artists I know who don't mind giving you a piece of art they've done but for goodness sake don't actually 'show' it to anyone because in their eyes it's not meant to be put forth as indicative of their style no matter how good you and anyone else might think it is; that all rang very true.

I also like that there are people out there who want him to do more art, I hope Peter gives him the okay.

Thanks.